The Chaos of Stars
by Kiersten White
Published: September 10, 2013
Genres: Mythology, Romance, Young Adult
Format: eARC (288 pages)
Source: For Review
Isadora’s family is seriously screwed up. Of course, as the human daughter of Egyptian gods, that pretty much comes with the territory. She’s also stuck with parents who barely notice her, and a house full of relatives who can’t be bothered to remember her name. After all, they are going to be around forever—and she’s a mere mortal....
I really struggled with The Chaos of Stars. I adore Kiersten White’s Paranormalcy series, but this felt like someone found a Egyptian mythology textbook and stuck in a teenage girl. I mean, I liked the mythology stories and I did learn a little bit about them, but it did not feel updated or interpreted in any way. The Egyptian myths are completely unchanged all the way down to the god’s appearances. Because of that I felt like I was reading an explanation of mythology instead of a modern narrative.
The dysfunction of what the gods would be like as a family was kind of amusing. At the same time, since the gods looked the same as they do in their mythological stories, it was really hard for me to imagine them actually sitting around the breakfast table. The plot jumped around a lot since the story would go from memories, mythology stories at the beginning of each chapter, and bad dreams the main character, Isadora, would have. The conflict through the story depends a lot on dark dreams that she has and it was not enough to keep my interest. Without a good conflict the story really started to drag.
The writing is very much the funny and quirky stuff that I remember from Paranormalcy. I could see Kiersten’s writing style come through. Sadly, the writing came across as very fluffy and superficial since I didn’t find any depth to the story to balance out all the quirk. I really wanted something bittersweet or sad to help me really connect with the story like there was in Paranormalcy.
All the swear words had been replaced with “floods” and “chaos” which were used a lot and it started to get on my nerves towards the end. Not that there needed to be swearing, but a bigger variety of words would have been nice.
The romance was cute but cheesy. Their connection was very dependent on fate and their love being written in the stars etc. Still, there were a few moments that I said, “Awwww.” I found the characters hard to connect to and visualize. It was hardest for me to connect with Isadora because I really didn’t get why she had an issue with her mother. It was hard for me to visualize the setting, too. I’ve even been to Balboa Park a few times. I love it there and I still couldn’t picture what it looked like from the descriptions. At least, I’m pretty sure it was set in Balboa Park…
Overall, it was mostly cliche, predictable, and very convenient, too. I felt relieved that it had ended and I could move on to something else.
Content Rating: Medium, for talk about Osiris’s “junk” but there was no other swearing.
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